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@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-title: Giggi.me instructions.
-subtitle: Sharing how to bring quickly a static site up.
+title: Giggi.me why and how
+subtitle: Sharing why and how to bring a static website up
 date: 02.10.19
 summary: *Some brief notes on how Giggi.me was made*
 slug: making-giggi-me
@@ -7,52 +7,53 @@
 
 ### Rationale
 
-In the illusion of getting off the big grid of the internet comes giggi.me.
+In the illusion of getting myself off the big grid of the internet comes
+giggi.me.
 
-Inspired by ideas about how the internet works like and unlike how I believe it
-should, giggi.me is a tiny step towards the latter case.
+Inspired by ideas about how the internet really works, giggi.me is a tiny step
+towards how I'd like the internet could work like.
 
 Such as many other phenomena in nature, we seem to recognise that the way the
-internet grows isn't, in a moral and psychological sense, fair.
+internet grows isn't, in a moral, psychological and maybe social sense, fair.
 
-Little nodes struggle to be reachable at all and their only hope not to drown
-in the ocean is hooking up some big - very big - ship that will carry them
-around.
+Little nodes struggle to be reachable at all, their only hope not to drown
+in the ocean is hooking up some bigger ship that will carry them around.
 
-In doing so, those ships become always bigger and bigger, every time gaining
-control over larger chunks of water.
+The fight for survival of many little nodes turns those ships into full size
+cruise vessels and the experience of browsing the internet begins to resemble
+crossing Main Street in Disneyland.
 
 Since human beings have managed to get this far by governing some aspects of
-their natural habitat, I hope that you will clone down everything from giggi.me
-and stick around with your own boat.
+their natural habitat, I hope that you will stick around on your own raft.
 
 ### How it works
+
+giggi.me is shamelessly naive.
 ```
-+-----+              generates               +--------------+
-| tod | ···································> | docker setup |
-+-----+                                      +--------------+
-
-+--------+     +--------------+  run   +--------------------+
-| docker | (+) | docker setup | ·····> | containerized apps |
-+--------+     +--------------+        +--------------------+
-
-+--------------------+         the internet        +--------+
-| containerized apps | <·························> | people |
-+--------------------+                             +--------+
+         +--------------+          generates          +--------------+
+         |     tod      |····························>| docker setup |····
+         +--------------+                             +--------------+   ·
+                                                                        (+)
+         +--------------+            runs             +--------------+   ·
+     ····|     apps     |<····························|    docker    |<···
+     ·   +--------------+                             +--------------+
+    (+)
+     ·   +--------------+            reach            +--------------+
+     ···>|   internet   |····························>|    people    |
+         +--------------+                             +--------------+
 ```
 
 At the moment if you clone down [tod](git clone "https://www.giggi.me/gerrit/tod"),
 you will get what I have put in there already, which is a code review tool
 and a static blog.
 
-What you can do, is to add more modules, so for them to be available to the
-public. Tod is modular and flexible, you can flip on and off apps that are
-relevant for your purposes.
+What you can do, is to add more modules. Tod is modular and flexible, you can
+flip on and off apps that are relevant for your purposes.
 
 1. [Jinja docs](http://jinja.pocoo.org/docs/2.10/templates/#sort)
 2. [Pelican 3.6.3 docs](http://docs.getpelican.com/en/3.6.3/content.html)
 3. [Pelican, using a static page as home](http://docs.getpelican.com/en/3.6.3/faq.html?highlight=faq#how-can-i-use-a-static-page-as-my-home-page)
-4. [Markdown docs](https://markdown-guide.readthedocs.io/en/latest/)
-5. [Markdown docs](https://daringfireball.net/projects/markdown/syntax)
+4. [Markdown docs 1](https://markdown-guide.readthedocs.io/en/latest/)
+5. [Markdown docs 2](https://daringfireball.net/projects/markdown/syntax)
 6. [tod: template, open, deploy](https://www.giggi.me/gerrit/plugins/gitiles/tod/)
 7. [codeigniter](https://codeigniter.com/)